Game start!
I've always been with my technology because having technology betraying you isn't as much pain as your best friend doing the same. I never had much interest in changing who I was I just followed everything at my own pace so I never talked to anyone else since I was the odd one out. Technology helped me escape all of this without it I wouldn't have been able to understand why a person would act the way they do. I used technology as an open test experiment watching carefully why people act the way they do. They never asked so I don't say a thing. Questions like why can't you trust us? and why aren't you telling us anything? Why should I trust? Why should I tell you anything when I know the answers your going to give me? Spending time with technology many of the things people do become so predictable, it gets boring. I'm like a little kid playing a game over and over again looking for something new that I haven't found yet.
I'm always behind in understanding what's going on in class so when I come home rather than asking people all the time(I'm just bothering them)I look things up on my own if I can't find an answer I'd rather give up and move on. I don't like it if I were to stay in a place for too long like people they eventually move on from one place to other. People are forever changing moving from one world to other(child to teen to adult). It's sad to watch them move on like that but I'm glad for them sometimes if in a good way if not I'd watch their mistakes till I can see a change. Aside from technology test trying to get people to move from one place to another I can do that in reality too. People sometimes feel stuck and can't move on with their life giving up or lost. I use the stuff I learn about humans to help them move on, if they can't move on I'll stay until they see the light because I don't want that sadness to be lingering around them anymore. That's way I've been doing my whole life a never changing thing I enjoy doing. Technology has help me realized that I loved helping people in that way.
Technology made me realized that I was very different from other people creating an impossible personality. I wished to keep this pure gift in this planet no matter how much it may hurt or how people would hate me. I believe we all started out the same way just that we got inflicted by different things around us. I have no memories of my past and keep on losing memories(I think I got hit in the head too many times =3=) I spend time behind a computer because even if I were to forget so many things it wouldn't hurt as much if I did spend time with my friends and forgot I don't want to see it rain. I know life is painful so I just choose this way to lived it. Even though all of this technology may advance you generation what would we get out of it, little kids starting to go to work? I haven't watch t.v at home but too me it's just a form of entertainment that gives little kids too much information, I don't enjoy hearing about a 9 year old kid knowing why people would smoking, drugs, alcohol, etc. I don't think they are ready for all that information because it's just too much for them to handle and they wouldn't really understand all that nonsense. I mean it takes us many years to understand all of this and giving that much to a little kid might explode their brain out o.o''
I think I went to deep -decides to stop- O.O'''
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Well I guess you need a thesis. xD
ReplyDeleteYou put a lot of your own experiences but I think you could use evidence from Feed or the bad technology is good for you, the long excerpt. Since you are saying that technology seems to be a friend of yours on the first two paragraphs, I thought maybe that is a good evidence that you can find. Like watching the television to figure out what they are feeling by their expressions and reactions/actions. Then you said technology help you love to help others, which connects to the game part and the internet part because people write game guides and help each other to get to the next level.
For your third paragraph, you start going off the topic from the first two, and I'm not sure what you want to say here mainly because there are a lot of points that you are talking out. You seem to say that technology is good because it gives a lot of information but then it might be too much for a kid to handle too much information at a time. I think you can find something that talks about how technology ruins our brain cells or how much of the other things that kids sees even though they are not trying to find it (like porn ads/inappropriate ads).
You said that technology is an entertainment and you use it to read people, it is like in the excerpt how we can read peoples movements if we play the game over and over again. And like the television, because we have imprinted their expressions and what the knowledge that we learn from the shows (from online, I'm the same too since I don't really watch television at home, I'm more on the computer) that we are able to interpret and predict what we want much more easier.
I think you are giving out great points and there is a lot of things that you want to say but I thought you could have narrow it down to something that connects all the paragraphs. Because I kind of read your paragraphs that each paragraphs sort of talks about different things but there are some that connects. You talk how technology affects you but what do you think how it affect the other kids. I thought your thesis can be more of a general thesis of how it is because it seems you are providing a lot of yours life. You said you are the odd one out, how would that be different than the "normal ones"? Truthfully I keep reading your paragraphs and feel as if you are sad or in sorrow when you write out about your lifestyle. You want to help people from their pain but you also seem to have pain yourself. (This is just my opinion).